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Cat Malin's avatar

I so wanted him to live.

Ciro Capão's avatar

Sorry, I rarely do happy endings hehe

Cat Malin's avatar

😆 I shoulda guessed by the title, really!

Kenn Reff's avatar

Me too. 😢

Alicia's avatar

I don't even know what to say. Dark. On a lighter note though, you created such an interesting world. Very well written.

Ciro Capão's avatar

thank you for the kind words!

whispers if things seem to be going well for a character in my story, there is a twist coming hehehe

Pale Blue Glow Science Fantasy's avatar

Nice story. Did you ever see The Expanse? In season 2 or 3, a guy is racing a ship —livestreaming it at the same time—who decides to go through the ring gate and bites it. This reminded me a bit of that.

Ciro Capão's avatar

yeah, I’m a big fan of both the books and the show! Didn’t realise it, but it is indeed like that!

Li Mitchell's avatar

Poor Erik and Debby...

Ciro Capão's avatar

need to take out my frustation on my characters somehow hehehe

Li Mitchell's avatar

Psst. Take it out on bad guy characters. I hear it’s good for the health. ;)

You did a great job developing the world and making it atmospheric!