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F.O. Gameiro's avatar

beautifully melancholy.

Carolyn davis's avatar

This story honestly felt haunting in the best way, especially the contrast between Jonathan’s controlled life and the Dreamer’s chaotic imagination. I really loved how quiet and reflective the conversations felt because they made the ending hit way harder emotionally than I expected. Did you always plan for Jonathan to start changing emotionally the longer he stayed with the dreamer because that final scene felt really powerful?

Also, I got an idea while reading. Can we connect in DMs? So I can share the idea with you there <333

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